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Writing Lore Pages

Planet and Faction Pages

As stated on the Wiki Staff Guidelines page, it is required that work-in-progress pages be avoided. In practice, what this means is that a wiki page should have each section filled out and ready to present before being pushed to the wiki. There should be no "finish later" or "WIP" text under a section. However, elements of the section can be expanded upon after their release.

Lore pages in general should strive to stay below 15,000 words. They should be proofread by not just the lore team they apply to, but the Lore Team Administration, to ensure no continuity errors, spelling mistakes, or grammatical errors (or at least as few as possible) make it to the live page. Sections in a lore page should strive to stay at or below four paragraphs. If they extend over four paragraphs, the section in question should be trimmed, moved to its own page (if a faction page or capital planet), or sectioned under a collapsible box.

Writers should strive to avoid hard numbers on population. Percentages are generally acceptable when describing a demographic.

The language of the lore page should remain generally objective, distant, and factual, similar to a Wikipedia page or a news article. Ambiguity in in-universe events or history can remain present, and is strongly encouraged to be included.

The exception to objective language is quotes, which should be limited to one (1), centered at the top of a section. They should generally be formatted with the quote (in quotation marks) in italics, a hyphen, the name and occupation the quote is attributed to, and the context of the quote. An example is:

“The people of Biesel could all collectively protest for a century. It still won’t change anything, because power in the Republic does not lie with people. It lies with corporations.” - Hugo Beasley, “A Himean In Mendell City”, released 2464

The year the quote is from is relevant if the quote is from a "published work", such as a book or movie. If the quoted individual is deceased, their date of birth and death should be next to their name, as exemplified:

“I think there are better ways to build a society than draining the life and light from its best citizens.” - Mahmud ibn Amin (2328 - 2419), physicist and second leader of “Project Hubris”

In lore wiki articles, the usage of bold text to denote emphasis on written dates or persons should be avoided. One exception is the name of the subject within the introductory paragraph of the article, such as:

In the core worlds of Humanity’s power and built upon the center of the largest phoron deposits in the known galaxy, the Federal Republic of Biesel is an independent state and the economic and social centre of the Orion Spur.

A full, complete planet or faction page should have the following sections:

• A brief introductory paragraph, summarising basic elements of the subject. Do not put an "Overview" header over this paragraph.
• If the page is a faction, Population and Planets, in which the planets of the faction are listed and described in brief.
• History, in which the planet/faction's history is explained
• Environment, in which the planet's landscape, general climate, and basic atmospheric composition is explained
  • An environment section is also where the planet's continents and its star system should be elaborated upon, provided its system does not have its own page (such as Tau Ceti or Sol).
• Economy, in which the planet/faction's economy is elaborated upon. Currencies, industries, employment, and megacorporate involvement should be included here. Megacorporate involvement should have approval from the Lore Team Administration. If the planet/faction has its own corporations, these do not need to be approved by the Lore Team Administration unless they are involved with the megacorporations.
• Politics and Government, in which the planet/faction's governmental system should be elaborated on. Political parties and common ideologies can be included. Note that if a planet is already part of a faction, they do not require a Politics and Government section (but it can be included if relevant).
• Culture and Demographics, in which the general culture and attitudes of the planet are expanded on. This is the widest-ranging section of the page; it is where content such as cuisine, language, societal attitudes, media, common sayings, architecture, art, fashion, etc. can be placed under. If a digression on a specific aspect of culture extends for more than two (2) paragraphs, it should be placed under a subheading.
  • If the planet has a significant population of immigrants, whether they be humans from another nation or aliens, this can be placed under a subheading. The relevant page describing the species abroad should be linked, such as Skrell Abroad or Unathi Abroad. Make sure to consult with the relevant lore team when including demographics from alien species teams.
    • Crime, if included, should also be placed under a subheading in Culture and Demographics.
• Military, in which the planet/faction's military and armed forces are described. This includes branches, general actions, and structure. If the planet is part of a larger faction, this section is not required.
• Technology, in which the planet/faction's notable technological advances or specializations are expanded on. If the planet is part of a larger faction, this section is not required.
• If the page is a planet, Major Cities/Population Centres, where a number of major population centres can be described in brief. This should range from one to two paragraphs. Not applicable to faction pages.

If a section is elaborated on further on a larger page, the link to the page should be underneath the header of the section. It should look like:

See also: Biesellite Culture and Society

If a planet or faction page has a long table of contents (over six sections), use the "TOC Hidden" template at the bottom of the introductory paragraph.